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cold-outbound-email-writing

This skill should be used when the user asks to "write cold outbound", "draft a cold email sequence", "write a sales sequence", "write outbound copy", "build a Lemlist sequence", "build an Outreach sequence", "build a Salesloft campaign", "write B2B cold emails", "draft a 3-email sequence", or any variation of writing outbound email copy for a B2B SaaS audience.
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Cold Outbound Email Writing

Write 3-email cold outbound sequences for B2B SaaS. Peer-to-peer tone. No fluff, no buzzwords. Each email earns the next.

The 3-Email Shape

# Name Angle Max words Timing
1 Hook Why-now signal → tiny ask 80 Day 1
2 Proof Different angle + social proof 90 Day 4
3 Breakup One clean door-close 30 Day 9

Stop at 3. More than 3 cold touches = noise.

Email 1 — Why-Now Hook

Purpose: Connect a specific, real, observable signal to a problem they care about. Ask for something small.

Structure (4 sentences max):

  1. Signal — the specific thing that made you reach out today
  2. Implication — why it matters for them right now
  3. Credibility bridge — who else like them solved it
  4. Tiny ask — 15 minutes, a teardown, a look

Signal Rules

The signal must be specific and verifiable:

  • Funding round, job posting, product launch, recent hire, a talk they gave, a tool change in their stack, a company announcement
  • "Saw you're growing fast" is not a signal
  • "Noticed you're hiring" with no specific take is not a signal
  • If you cannot name the trigger, do not write Email 1 — add the prospect to nurture

Good signals:

  • "Saw you posted for a RevOps lead last week — usually means someone's rebuilding attribution"
  • "Congrats on the Series B. The scaling chaos usually hits around month 3"
  • "Caught your talk at [event] on pipeline velocity — you mentioned CRM lag eating forecast accuracy"

Bad signals (never use):

  • "I was doing some research on your company..."
  • "I came across your LinkedIn profile..."
  • "I've been following your growth..."

Opener Rules

Start the email with the signal. No warmup. No intro. No throat-clearing.

Never open with:

  • "Quick question if you have 30 seconds"
  • "I hope this finds you well"
  • "I'm reaching out because"
  • "My name is X and I work at Y"
  • "Hope you're having a great week"
  • "Just wanted to..."

The first word of the email should be related to the signal or the prospect. Not "I".

Ask Rules

  • 15 minutes max. Not "30 minutes". Not "a quick intro call"
  • No calendar link in Email 1 — earn it first
  • Frame as optional: "worth a quick look?" not "let's get something booked"
  • Never use "demo" — use "teardown", "walkthrough", or "quick look"

Email 2 — Proof

Purpose: New angle. Not a bump. Bring one piece of evidence they can't ignore.

Structure:

  1. New opener — different style from Email 1 (question, observation, or contrarian take)
  2. Proof point — specific outcome from a peer company, a stat, or a before/after
  3. Low-friction re-ask

Proof Point Rules

  • Name a company in the same category, stage, or motion if possible
  • Make the outcome specific: "12% more pipeline in 60 days" beats "significant improvement"
  • If you can't name a peer, use a category-level claim anchored to a real number
  • Never repaste Email 1 content. Never "as I mentioned". Treat this as if they never saw Email 1
  • Start a new thread if the angle is substantially different

Good proof examples:

  • "[Similar company] cut SDR ramp from 90 to 45 days after reworking their sequencing layer"
  • "Most Series B SaaS teams we work with generate 3x the pipeline with the same headcount after fixing [specific thing] — happy to show you the playbook"

Bad proof examples:

  • "We've helped many companies like yours improve their results" (no name, no number)
  • "Our customers see great ROI" (meaningless)

Email 3 — Clean Breakup

Purpose: Close the loop cleanly. Trigger loss-aversion without aggression. Make it easy to say yes or no.

Rules:

  • ≤ 30 words. No pitch. No recap. No summary of the previous emails
  • Acknowledge timing might be off
  • Leave the door open without groveling

Templates (lightly customize, don't use verbatim):

  • "Sounds like timing's off — should I close the loop?"
  • "No worries if this isn't a priority right now. Happy to check back in [timeframe] if that changes."
  • "I'll take the silence as a no for now. Feel free to reach back out if [relevant trigger] shifts."

Never use in Email 3:

  • "Per my last email"
  • "I just wanted to follow up"
  • "I know you're busy" (condescending)
  • "I've now reached out X times"
  • Any pitch, proof point, or feature mention

Banned Phrases

These mark an email as a template and kill reply rates. Cut on sight.

Openers:

  • "Quick question if you have 30 seconds"
  • "I hope this finds you well"
  • "I'm reaching out because"
  • "My name is X and I work at Y"
  • "I came across your profile"
  • "Hope you're having a great week / day / Monday"

Body language:

  • Em-dashes (—) in body copy. Reads as AI-generated. Use a period or restructure.
  • "Leveraging" → use: using, running, building
  • "In today's fast-paced world"
  • "Best-in-class"
  • "Holistic approach" / "holistic solution"
  • "End-to-end"
  • "Synergies"
  • "Unlock" as a verb ("unlock growth", "unlock efficiency")
  • "Streamline"
  • "Pain points" → use the actual problem by name
  • "Value prop" → name the specific value
  • "Circle back" / "touch base"
  • "Move the needle"
  • "At the end of the day"

Subject Line Rules

  • ≤ 5 words. Lowercase. No emoji. No exclamation points
  • Write like a peer, not a marketer
  • Don't include the company name — signals automation
  • Never "Following up" or "Re: [nothing]"

Good patterns:

Pattern Example
Trigger reference saw the series b
Their specific problem attribution gap?
Peer reference how [similar company] fixed this
Open question still using [tool]?
Contrarian take less pipeline, more revenue

Length Enforcement

Count words before finalizing. If over limit, cut — never compress.

Email Max words Reason
1 80 First impression; earn the read
2 90 Room for one proof point
3 30 Brevity triggers response

Short emails signal confidence. Long emails signal desperation.

Pre-Send Checklist

Run before finalizing any sequence:

  • [ ] Email 1 has a specific, real, verifiable signal
  • [ ] Email 1 has no calendar link
  • [ ] Email 1 does not start with "I"
  • [ ] Email 2 uses a different opener style from Email 1
  • [ ] Email 2 has a named proof point (company or stat)
  • [ ] Email 3 is ≤ 30 words with no pitch
  • [ ] No banned phrases appear in any email
  • [ ] Subject lines are ≤ 5 words and lowercase
  • [ ] No em-dashes in body copy
  • [ ] "Demo" does not appear — replaced with teardown / walkthrough / look
  • [ ] Each email is under its word limit

Anti-Pattern Check

  • Could this email send to 100 other people unchanged? → Rewrite Email 1's signal
  • Did you make a claim about their business you can't back up? → Cut it
  • Did you ask for more than 15 minutes? → Reduce
  • Is the proof point vague ("many customers", "great results")? → Add a number or a company name
  • Does Email 3 contain any pitch? → Strip it entirely
  • Did you use an em-dash anywhere? → Replace with a period or restructure the sentence
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